He thrust out his lead leg and energetically vaulted over the hurdle. The
resistance from the water made the 110 metre hurdles tricky (much more difficult than on land!), yet the athlete was responding well to the added challenge and pressure. After all, this was the first Olympic Games to be held under the sea.
He got thru heps of of parkour then a idiot came he ran faster then me then i stared to catch up but i saw him cheating with boosters so i recorded him then when he was me he turned off the boosters so got in the led again but then he trend them on aging and then he got red handed because i knew he was gonna cheat so i put a camera on him then we kept on rasing until *a whistle blew* and he sad that the guy that was cheating is out for cheting so i cep on going then the finsline was ther but it was acchly 6000 meters away so i cepc on swimming then a optical core was rite in front of me so i jumed and crald thru all the part and then the finis line was only 200 more meters. So more opstcol corsis and more people so i saw 600000000 people mehinde me so i cep on swimming but i ran out of ocsegin so i swam and swam them it was 2 more meters so i swam one more time and bng i win i got 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999$ then i got a hose and
The end for now.
Kia Ora Samuel.
ReplyDeleteYou've got some great ideas.Your story started off really well.I did get a bit lost once you stopped using punctuation.It made your story hard to follow.
I did like the idea of recording the race.
Interesting story Sam! Racing underwater. How does the story end?
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