Friday, August 20, 2021

under water danger 2021

For hundreds of years, they had been sleeping.

The ocean had been their home since that terrible day, when they had been

banished to this prison of endless ocean.

Now that they had been rediscovered, the time for waiting was at an end.


The divers were shocked when they saw the colossal, stone giants begin to

stir in the water.

It was time it has had


a lot of stones people have found some sort of cell that is very bad

It made fish go rotten then a person touch it and trend in to a giant octopus the giant octopus


went onto land and mine guns shot at it and tanks but the giant octopus blow them up


with its tentacle then the giant octopus got bit by a big shark then the giant octopus dyed and




          The end

2 comments:

  1. Very interesting story Samuel! You have a great imagination!

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  2. With your words Samuel,they made me feel like I was one of the divers.Well done.
    You used great describing words and made the story feel very real.
    I'm glad that it's not though.I don't like the thought of a giant octopus being able to survive on land.

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